
How to write better awards entries
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Whether itâs watching the glitz and glamour of the Oscars on television or attending an industry gala hosted by a mid-tier stand-up comedian doing top-up corporate work, who doesnât love an awards ceremony?
As well as the lure of pre-paid wine on the table and chicken wrapped in Parma ham, any awards do also serves as a welcome celebration of 12 months of hard work, progress and achievements. Theyâre important, too, especially in our sector. After all, winning a can provide an institution with many tangible benefits. A big win can turn heads in the industry and help attract new students, funding and accreditations.
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Before getting to that stage, though, youâve got an award entry form to navigate. Sometimes theyâre a teasingly open 2,000-word essay, encouraging the squishing together of a sprawling mass of activity, financial reports, student testimonials and cold, hard data â all of them competing for airtime. Other times the form is broken up into specific questions, so you canât hide behind waffle. But whatever form the entry takes, what matters most is how you tell your institutionâs story. Having written so many drafts of award entries that I see tracked changes from senior stakeholders whenever I close my eyes, I can offer some advice:
Get a comprehensive recap of the year
The first thing to do before you start writing should be get as many other people involved as possible, then go back through the eligibility period as a group and pick out the best things youâve done. Take time to analyse what your actions say about your institution. For example, you might want to base an entry around EDI success, but if youâre struggling to find immediate evidence, then youâre better off looking at what you have done. As an institution you will have done a lot, and not everything will escape the edit. Itâs up to you, though, to spot patterns across the many individual initiatives.
Interview your stakeholders
If youâre looking to tell a complete story in your entry, then simply asking your key stakeholders to provide some top-line bullet points isnât going to cut it. Take the time to schedule a proper interview with them. Go into it with an outsiderâs mentality and ask them questions that force them to really sell you their department, programme or initiative. Then, when youâre finished, get the whole thing transcribed. Doing this, youâll find yourself getting not just ideas from them, but direct phrases from these transcripts will find their way into the entry verbatim. After all, they are the ones who are most likely to speak compellingly about the nuances of their work.
Tell the whole story, warts and all
After winning big at this yearâs Oscars, best picture winner Everything Everywhere All At Once has a lot going for it, itâs fair to say. The wins only tell part of the filmâs story, though. This was a labour-of-love movie that took on a market full of franchise tentpoles. The movie was great, sure, but it had a real story. Made on a relatively shoestring budget, the film was put out in the world by a critically adored distributor. There was a diverse cast that included Ke Huy Quan, who played Short Round in Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom. The VFX crew taught themselves to create effects by watching YouTube videos. These parts of the filmâs story arenât just interesting morsels â theyâre all elements that the jury would have considered alongside the product itself.
Scorsese didnât win an Oscar for Mean Streets, he won it for The Departed. Leonardo DiCaprioâs long-running snubbing was undoubtedly a factor in the judging of his winning best actor in The Revenant, as was the fact that the well-reported shoot for the movie apparently put him through hell. Stories help sell the product.
Itâs fair to say that your institutionâs backstory wonât be reported on in anywhere near as much detail as that of Hollywood stars and movies. Thatâs why you have to pick up the slack on the entry form. If your staff count is significantly lower than your rivalsâ, mention it! If you have no budget and are innovating with what little youâve got, mention it!
Make sure to include the areas youâve improved on, and donât be shy in saying how bad they used to be. If your student numbers have grown massively, then thatâs great. But try to outline what was holding them back before. If your library received increased investment, then mention why it needed it. Not skirting around the bad can provide a jury with a compelling context around your improvements. It may feel counterproductive to badmouth your university when youâre right up to the word count, but people go wild for a good before/after juxtaposition.
Read the statistics first
Treat your statistics with the respect they deserve. Donât try to retrofit statistics to suit your narrative. Donât try to shoehorn in nice stats if they arenât relevant. Go out and collect your data properly. Read through it, understand it, find the story in that boring Excel document. Doing it the other way round is tantamount to cheating â and everyone can tell.
Work out how to refer to your team and your entry
So, youâve got the facts, youâve got the stats, your key stakeholders have bought into the story youâre telling across your entry â now itâs just about writing the whole thing down. Thereâs no one right way to do this, of course, but itâs important to give consideration to the language and tone you use. Using âweâ can be a really powerful tool for a challenger brand, allowing them to tug at the heartstrings of a jury. After all, who doesnât love the emotional pull of a journey? However, if youâre a brand at the top of the tree, talking in this way can come across as overfamiliar and the degree of formality that âitâ brings could help take you further.
Sam Russell is a content executive at Arden University, UK.
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